teomark2000

teomark2000:

Research topic:

'Food photography' may be a sign of mental illness

Symbol:The food,Camera phone,#foodporn,the angle of the food,food photography

Background:Food photography is a still life specialization of commercial photography, aimed at producing attractive photographs of food for use…

I think you can improve on your background. Based on what research? Can you show us the news article, maybe a link or reposting of that news article with that research? I think you also can elaborate more on the questions, to make them more self-personalized, affecting teenager’s or our identity, for example. I think you can still state what food photography affects. Other than that, your post is very clear and has an interesting concept, which is good.

mezzotopia

mezzotopia:

Research Topic: Nowadays many teenagers love to take selfies.

Symbols: Camera, phones, polaroids.

Background: A selfie is a photograph that one has taken of oneself, typically one taken with a smartphone or webcam and uploaded to a social media website. For me, it symbolises our need for…

I think you should work more on your approach, for example, your approach on your poem is missing, you need to include that in, I also think you can further improve on your research topic. So what if many teenagers take selfies? I feel that you can elaborate further on why do you think they love to take selfies nowadays, supported by your evidence in the background.